Final Revision:Theory Essay

Jeff Thorkelson

English 3150

Dr. Devries

10 December 2009

Theory Essay Revision

When the Industrial Revolution came about, man has struggled with an ever-changing social system.  The idea of Marxism came about and decided to question these ideas put in place and to make people rethink the social structure.  In Marxist ideology “what we often classify as a world view is actually the articulations of the dominant class. Marxism generally focuses on the clash between the dominant and repressed classes in any given age and also may encourage art to imitate what is often termed an “objective” reality” (Siegel).  With this new Marxist movement, critics began looking at and writing different literary works to discuss the relationship between the arts, politics, and basic economic reality in terms of a general social theory. (Critical Approaches: Definition Of Marxist Criticism). One such novel that many have looked at through the Marxist lens is George Orwell’s novel 1984.  Today, many “diverse views exist today as to the applicability and relevance of his work to current events. Certainly, the three great enemies that he combated Imperialism, socialism, and Marxism”(Rodden 217).  Some literary critics believe that Orwell intentionally had Marxism in mind when writing the novel and some think he had a different reason for writing it.  We will investigate deeper into the novel to see if Orwell was intentionally writing the book in a Marxist perspective or was he trying point out a major class difference during the time that he wrote the novel?

Since Marxism really focuses on struggles between the classes in society, we will first look at the way Orwell portrays the classes in his futuristic society in his novel.  One way to look at this novel is by discussing if it is related with dialectical materialism. Dialectical materialism is the theory that “history develops neither in a random fashion nor in a linear one but instead as struggle between contradictions that ultimately find resolution in a synthesis of the two sides. For example, class conflicts lead to new social systems” (Dobie 92).

Some theorists say that Orwell did not like the government that he was living under and thought that he had a strong dislike for its totalitarian ways.  An article from the New Yorker discusses this distaste stating that “After the war, Orwell became most famous as a left-baiting anti-totalitarian…systemic change was necessary in order to make Britain a decent and fair country to live in” (Wood 54).  Some clues of this can be taken out of the novel.  There are three types of social parties presented in 1984.  The Proles, or the lower class and normal everyday citizens, the outer party, who make up a small portion of the government employees, and the inner party, only 2% of the population and is the upper and ruling class.  Our main character, Winston Smith, is part of the outer party who works for the party revising historical records.  With a society that is presented in Orwell’s novel, we get the feeling right from the beginning that the inner party rules over everyone else.  Even the party’s slogan “war is peace, freedom is slavery, ignorance is strength” is oppressive because they are constantly being contradicted and controlled by the ruling party (Orwell 16).  There is also a struggle with the ruling party because everyone is watched at all times.  This is shown by the huge posters stating, “Big Brother is Watching You.”  Screens in everyone’s apartments spew out party propaganda and constantly monitor every move the proles and outer party make.  This distaste for the government can also be supported by a claim that Orwell stated saying that “”The mere efficiency of such a system, the elimination of waste and obstruction, is obvious. However horrible this system may seem to us, it works.” Only by shifting to a planned, nationalized economy and a “classless, ownerless” society could the British prevail” (Wood 54).  Orwell is stating in this quotation that only a classless society would allow the British to prevail.  Having classes only means that they system will only create problems and obstruct the true goal and needs of the country.

Orwell also shows his distaste for the government by having the government control everything that goes on is people’s daily life. In 1984, the government has complete control of the press and is able to change things that have already been printed.  The government goes back to past papers and changes things that they do not agree with.  Winston Smith’s job is to change these past articles to fit the party’s ideals when he states “Winston’s greatest pleasure in life was in his work. Most of it was a tedious routine…and your estimate of what the Party wanted you to say. Winston was good at this kind of thing. On occasion he had even been entrusted with the rectification of the Times leading articles” (Orwell 44).  By this, it is showing that Orwell might believe that in the future, the government will have complete control of the press and will have the powered to change anything they want to fit with their own agenda.  This is a main theme in the novel and is referred to many times.  The government also controls how people speak by getting rid of words.  This ensures that people do not have the mental capacity that they should have.

Some theorists on the other hand do not think Orwell had any Marxist agenda when writing 1984.  Some theorist think that he was just predicting his vision of the future and did not have any political agenda or statement about how the world was run at that time.  This can be shown through multiple quotations and writings that Orwell has written over the years through his journalistic and novelistic ventures.  Orwell went through two World Wars and wrote about the power of politic and the impact that it has on people, but he also wrote how a socialist and Marxist government can essentially ruin the essence and strength of a country.  Over the years, many theorists started writing how Orwell had not affliation with any political party or agenda.  Most people were just confused and mixed up with his work.  Columnist Louis Menand sums up this statement about this particular theory on Orwell’s stance when he states

“It has included, over the years, ex-Communists, Socialists, left-wing anarchists, right-wing libertarians, liberals and conservatives: every group in a different uniform, but with the same button pinned to the lapel—Orwell Was Right. Almost the only thing Orwell’s posthumous admirers have in common, besides the button, is anti-Communism. But they all somehow found support for their particular bouquet of moral and political values in Orwell’s writings, which have been universally praised as “honest,” “decent,” and “clear” (Menand).

Columnist for the New Yorker, James Wood, also wrote on Orwell’s 1984 on this perspective and mentioned that “Orwell feared what he most desired: the future. But it is too easy to gloat over his contradictions to point out that he wrote so well about the drabness and the horror of totalitarianism because he himself had a tendency toward drab omnipotence; or that the great proponent of socialist collectivity liked rustic isolation” (Wood 54).  Orwell wrote what he wrote because of his fear of the future.  Orwell was essentially obsessed with his own weakness of not being able to live forever so he feared the future because of it.  Wood believes that all of his writings on dystopia and totalitarian government are just his way of dealing with the future and what will come of the future.   This could also be seen within the novel because the government that Winston Smith is a part of in the novel essentially stays the same at the end of the plot.  Nothing changes to the structure of the government and things go on as they did at the beginning of the book.  Even from the last few sentences of the novel, we get this.  Winston had just gotten finished at the ministry of love and the novel states that “it was all right, everything was all right, the struggle was finished. He had won the victory over himself.  He loved Big Brother” (Orwell  297).  Winston comes to realize that the government he lived in was fine and that everything would be ok because of this realization.  The whole time throughout the novel, Winston was rebelling against the party and he ended up getting caught and tortured because of it.  Winston then learned that it was ok to follow what the party says and he did finally at the end.  So in a way, this can be seen in a way to some that it is an anti-rebellious novel.  The novel is somehow against Marxism and Socialism and is telling the reader to oblige by the parties rules.

Orwell himself also wrote about the weaknesses of socialism and how in a modern world, it is weak and will not hold true.  In Orwell’s essay “The Lion and the Unicorn: Socialism and the English Genius” which is published in the book Why I Write, Orwell states that “at certain levels of civilization it does not exist, but as a positive force there is nothing to set beside it. International Socialism is as weak as straw in comparison with patriotism” (Orwell 11).  This particular piece of writing was written in 1940, eight years before 1984 was published.  Even though many things were going on in the world to influence him towards socialism, one being the British involvement in World War II, he still writes how Socialism is not the way to go.  As Orwell put it, socialism is weak and will eventually fall.  Orwell also discusses in this essay how every person differs and that it is impossible for people to be the same.  In the very same essay Orwell discusses how “it was thought proper to pretend that all human beings were very much alike, but in fact anyone able to use his eyes knows that the average of human behavior differs from country to country.  Things that could happen in one country could not happen in another” (Orwell 12).  Orwell states in this claim that human behavior is always different and changing depending on where you are and where you come from.  In 1984, the claim is that sameness is promoted and that everyone is to be controlled by the government in every aspect of his or her lives.  Even if they think in a way that the government does not like, they are punished or sentenced to death, but when Orwell makes a claim like this in other works, we can assume that he does not believe in both.

If we look at both sides, we can come to a conclusion that George Orwell was not a Marxist.  From a close reading of 1984 it might seem that Orwell is promoting a Socialist and Marxist agenda, but he is actually doing something different than what is presented on the surface.  As mentioned before, Orwell was very interested in his own future and the future in general.  With all the chaos that was going on in the world at this certain position in time, the world seemed like it was in utter turmoil.  There had been two world wars in his lifetime and who knows when there would be a third.  These events drastically changed his perspective on writing and politics and influenced the way he wrote no doubt, but Orwell did not intentionally make 1984 Marxist or Socialist with the sole purpose of doing so.  Orwell was just worried that this was the way the world was going to eventually end up if we kept on the path that we were going towards.  The book was a warning sign for the United Kingdom and the world that if we do change the way we are living, the world will turn into this horrible place like Oceania is in the novel.     Government to him was to basically serve and protect the rights of the people, not to enforce a ton of laws on them and also not to let everyone run rampant.  Orwell was also a big believer in the individual and that the individual is what’s most important, not a government.  In his essay “Politics and the English Language” he states that “one cannot change this all in a moment, but one can at least change one’s own habits, and from time to time on can even, if one jeers loudly enough, send some worn-out and useless phrase…into the dustbin where it belongs” (Orwell 120).  Literary Criticist Scott Lucas wrote in his article “The Scoialist Fallacy” that Orwell was greatly misunderstood and was a martyr to the wrong party.  For this argument that Orwell was not in fact part of this party is when Lucas reassures us that

Orwell is in the lineage of “English” socialists simply because of the belief that “only in a more egalitarian and fraternal society can liberties flourish and abound for the common people”. Nasty old Marxism is marginal to this philosophy: no need for messy concepts such as redistribution of income or common ownership of property. He was human, his most endearing characteristic. For there is nothing peculiarly socialist about being decent (Lucas).

With this being said, we can see that Orwell’s beliefs do not match up with the traditional Marxist philosophy.  Orwell was just a decent human being that cared for the welfare of the people and had no prior agenda to take down the government.  He believed in the common man and not the old Marxist philosophy.

Although both sides of the debate do have a valid argument for their claim, the one that seems like the right fit is that Orwell was not a Marxist.  A lot of Orwell’s writings and discussions on politics support that Orwell believed in a central government that was strong and firm, but was also not as involved as a dictatorship was. So Orwell was not in fact a Marxist, but he was a man of great power and had a lot of influence on politics.  His writings are a warning to future generations about their livelihoods and that if we do not cherish and protect what we have, we might lose it.  1984 is still as relevant today as it was when it was written, if not even more so.  Our world is constantly changing everyday and more of Orwell’s predictions are coming true. These changes make his writings even more important today because we are moving towards the Oceania depicted in the novel.  So you see, Orwell was not writing the novel through a Marxist or Socialist perspective, what he was really trying to do is warn us that if we let government have too much power, it might take over our lives, but he was not writing to get rid of all forms of government.

Works Cited

Dobie, Ann B. Theory into Practice: An Introduction to Literary Criticism. Thomson, 2002.

Lucas, Scott “The socialist fallacy.” New Statesman 129.4488 (2000): 47. Academic Search Elite. EBSCO. Web. 18 Nov. 2009.

Menand, Louis. “Honest, Decent, Wrong.”  The New Yorker 27 Jan. 2003.

Orwell, George. 1984. New York: Penguin Books, 2001.

Orwell, George. Why I Write. New York: Penguin Books, 2005.

RODDEN, JOHN “Orwell’s Significance for Intellectuals Today: “A Presence in Our Lives..” Midwest Quarterly 50.3 (2009): 216-231. Academic Search Elite. EBSCO. Web. 19 Nov. 2009.

Wood, James “A FINE RAGE.” New Yorker 85.9 (2009): 54-63. Academic Search Elite. EBSCO. Web. 18 Nov. 2009.

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Revision Ideas For Theory Essay

The essay that I am thinking about revising is my theory essay.  the reason for this being that I got a lot of good feedback and it could use a little improvement.   My essay was not as focused as it could have been the first time around and I have some good ideas to get the thesis and main focus of the essay a little more in depth.  I can also improve some of my quotes that I used from other critics.  I got some good advice for how i can improve this. My intro paragraph was also pretty long and vague so i need to condense it a little and get to my thesis quicker.  I also can get my conclusion a little more specific.  It seemed to get a little abstract so if i sum up my entire essay a little better, it will make my essay a little stronger.

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What Is Literature Now?

After going through this class, I still view literature in the same way.  Literature can come in many forms.  Books, magazines, blogs, everything. Although I may not personally enjoy every type of literature, i still think that all of these are important and should be considered literature. reading literature on the computer is not my thing and  i did not enjoy doing that.  It’s creative and new, but it’s way too hard for me to read while staring at a computer screen.  I would much rather have a book in my hands than stare at a computer screen for hours.  I appreciate the technology that is coming out and how it is reshaping literature, but its not for me.

as for future literary study, im not sure if i will continue with it.  My main focus with english is the actual education of it and writing.  as someone who wants to become a secondary school educator, i plan to only study literature in the sense of teaching it to others and not for criticism or other personal gain.

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Theory Essay Final Draft

Jeff Thorkelson

English 3150

Dr. Devries

19 November 2009

Theory Essay

Since the times when man evolved into critically thinking humans and were able to have reasoning skills, we have always had a social and economical class system.  When the Industrial Revolution came about, man has since been struggling with an ever-changing social system.  Capitalism was at the forefront and the strongest and best were at the top.  The poor were subjected to a life of poverty and had no chance of moving up on the socioeconomical ladder set up by the industrial revolution.  Marxism however came about and decided to question these ideas put in place and to make people rethink the social structure.  In Marxist ideology “what we often classify as a world view is actually the articulations of the dominant class. Marxism generally focuses on the clash between the dominant and repressed classes in any given age and also may encourage art to imitate what is often termed an “objective” reality” (Siegel).  So by that, they indented to look deeper into the economic system and focus on the troubles between the ones at the top and the ones who are being oppressed by the ones at the top.  With this new Marxist movement, critics began looking and writing at different literary works to discuss the relationship between the arts, politics, and basic economic reality in terms of a general social theory. (Critical Approaches: Definition Of Marxist Criticism). One such novel that many have looked at through the Marxist lens is George Orwell’s novel 1984.  Today, many “diverse views exist today as to the applicability and relevance of his work to current events. Certainly, the three great enemies that he combated Imperialism, socialism, and Marxism”(Rodden 217). We will be exploring Orwell’s novel and provide evidence for both sides of the debate.  Some literary critics believe that Orwell intentionally had Marxism in mind when writing the novel and some think he had a different reason for writing it.  We will investigate deeper into the novel to see if Orwell was intentionally writing the book in a Marxist perspective or was he trying point out a major class difference during the time that he wrote the novel.  If Orwell really was writing the novel from a Marxist perspective, what types did he address in the novel?

Since Marxism really focuses on struggles between the classes in society, we will first look at the way Orwell portrays the classes in his futuristic society in his novel.  One way to look at this novel is by discussing if it is related with dialectical materialism. Dialectical materialism is the theory that “history develops neither in a random fashion nor in a linear one but instead as struggle between contradictions that ultimately find resolution in a synthesis of the two sides. For example, class conflicts lead to new social systems” (Dobie 92).

Some theorists say that Orwell did not like the government that he was living under and thought that he had a strong dislike for its totalitarian ways.  An article from the New Yorker discusses this distaste stating that “After the war, Orwell became most famous as a left-baiting anti-totalitarian…systemic change was necessary in order to make Britain a decent and fair country to live in” (Wood 54).  Some clues of this can be taken out of the novel.  There are three types of social parties presented in 1984.  The Proles, or the lower class and normal everyday citizens, the outer party, who make up a small portion of the government employees, and the inner party, only 2% of the population and is the upper and ruling class.  Our main character, Winston Smith, is part of the outer party who works for the party revising historical records.  With a society that is presented in Orwell’s novel, we get the feeling right from the beginning that the inner party rules over everyone else.  Even the party’s slogan “war is peace, freedom is slavery, ignorance is strength” is oppressive because they are constantly being contradicted and controlled by the ruling party (Orwell 16).  There is also a struggle with the ruling party because everyone is watched at all times.  This is shown by the huge posters stating, “Big Brother is Watching You.”  Screens in everyone’s apartments spew out party propaganda and constantly monitor every move the proles and outer party make.  This distaste for the government can also be supported by a claim that Orwell stated saying that “”The mere efficiency of such a system, the elimination of waste and obstruction, is obvious. However horrible this system may seem to us, it works.” Only by shifting to a planned, nationalized economy and a “classless, ownerless” society could the British prevail” (Wood 54).  Orwell is stating in this quotation that only a classless society would allow the British to prevail.  Having classes only means that they system will only create problems and obstruct the true goal and needs of the country.

Orwell also shows his distaste for the government by having the government control everything that goes on is people’s daily life. In 1984, the government has complete control of the press and is able to change things that have already been printed.  The government goes back to past papers and changes things that they do not agree with.  Winston Smith’s job is to change these past articles to fit the party’s ideals when he states “Winston’s greatest pleasure in life was in his work. Most of it was a tedious routine…and your estimate of what the Party wanted you to say. Winston was good at this kind of thing. On occasion he had even been entrusted with the rectification of the Times leading articles” (Orwell 44).  By this, it is showing that Orwell might believe that in the future, the government will have complete control of the press and will have the powered to change anything they want to fit with their own agenda.  This is a main theme in the novel and is referred to many times.  The government also controls how people speak by getting rid of words.  This ensures that people do not have the mental capacity that they should have.

Some theorists on the other hand do not think Orwell had any Marxist agenda when writing 1984.  Some theorist think that he was just predicting his vision of the future and did not have any political agenda or statement about how the world was run at that time.  This can be shown through multiple quotations and writings that Orwell has written over the years through his journalistic and novelistic ventures.  Orwell went through two World Wars and wrote about the power of politic and the impact that it has on people, but he also wrote how a socialist and Marxist government can essentially ruin the essence and strength of a country.

On this particular subject, columnist for the New Yorker, James Wood, wrote on Orwell’s 1984 on this perspective and mentioned that “Orwell feared what he most desired: the future. But it is too easy to gloat over his contradictions to point out that he wrote so well about the drabness and the horror of totalitarianism because he himself had a tendency toward drab omnipotence; or that the great proponent of socialist collectivity liked rustic isolation” (Wood 54).  Orwell wrote what he wrote because of his fear of the future.  Orwell was essentially obsessed with his own weakness of not being able to live forever so he feared the future because of it.  Wood believes that all of his writings on dystopia and totalitarian government are just his way of dealing with the future and what will come of the future.   This could also be seen within the novel because the government that Winston Smith is a part of in the novel essentially stays the same at the end of the plot.  Nothing changes to the structure of the government and things go on as they did at the beginning of the book.  Even from the last few sentences of the novel, we get this.  Winston had just gotten finished at the ministry of love and the novel states that “it was all right, everything was all right, the struggle was finished. He had won the victory over himself.  He loved Big Brother” (Orwell  297).  Winston comes to realize that the government he lived in was fine and that everything would be ok because of this realization.  The whole time throughout the novel, Winston was rebelling against the party and he ended up getting caught and tortured because of it.  Winston then learned that it was ok to follow what the party says and he did finally at the end.  So in a way, this can be seen in a way to some that it is an anti-rebellious novel.  The novel is somehow against Marxism and Socialism and is telling the reader to oblige by the parties rules.

Orwell himself also wrote about the weaknesses of socialism and how in a modern world, it is weak and will not hold true.  In Orwell’s essay “The Lion and the Unicorn: Socialism and the English Genius” which is published in the book Why I Write, Orwell states that “at certain levels of civilization it does not exist, but as a positive force there is nothing to set beside it. International Socialism is as weak as straw in comparison with patriotism” (Orwell 11).  This particular piece of writing was written in 1940, eight years before 1984 was published.  Even though many things were going on in the world to influence him towards socialism, one being the British involvement in World War II, he still writes how Socialism is not the way to go.  As Orwell put it, socialism is weak and will eventually fall.  Orwell also discusses in this essay how every person differs and that it is impossible for people to be the same.  In the very same essay Orwell discusses how “it was thought proper to pretend that all human beings were very much alike, but in fact anyone able to use his eyes knows that the average of human behavior differs from country to country.  Things that could happen in one country could not happen in another” (Orwell 12).  Orwell states in this claim that human behavior is always different and changing depending on where you are and where you come from.  In 1984, the claim is that sameness is promoted and that everyone is to be controlled by the government in every aspect of his or her lives.  Even if they think in a way that the government does not like, they are punished or sentenced to death, but when Orwell makes a claim like this in other works, we can assume that he does not believe in both.

If we look at both sides, we can come to a conclusion about George Orwell’s Marxist views based on evidence for and against.  From a close reading of 1984 it might seem that Orwell is promoting a Socialist and Marxist agenda, but he is actually doing something different than what is presented on the surface.  As mentioned before, Orwell was very interested in his own future and the future in general.  With all the chaos that was going on in the world at this certain position in time, the world seemed like it was in utter turmoil.  There had been two world wars in his lifetime and who knows when there would be a third.  These events drastically changed his perspective on writing and politics and influenced the way he wrote no doubt, but Orwell did not intentionally make 1984 Marxist or Socialist with the sole purpose of doing so.  Orwell was just worried that this was the way the world was going to eventually end up if we kept on the path that we were going towards.  The book was a warning sign for the United Kingdom and the world that if we do change the way we are living, the world will turn into this horrible place like Oceania is in the novel.   Although both sides of the debate do have a valid argument for their claim, the one that seems like the right fit is that Orwell was not a Marxist.  A lot of Orwell’s writings and discussions on politics support that Orwell believed in a central government that was strong and firm, but was also not as involved as a dictatorship was.  Government to him was to basically serve and protect the rights of the people, not to enforce a ton of laws on them and also not to let everyone run rampant.  Orwell was also a big believer in the individual and that the individual is what’s most important, not a government.  In his essay “Politics and the English Language” he states that “one cannot change this all in a moment, but one can at least change one’s own habits, and from time to time on can even, if one jeers loudly enough, send some worn-out and useless phrase…into the dustbin where it belongs” (Orwell 120).

So was Orwell really a Marxist? Probably not, but he was a man of great power and had a lot of influence on politics.  His writings are a warning to future generations about their livelihoods and that if we do not cherish and protect what we have, we might lose it.  1984 is still as relevant today as it was when it was written, if not even more so.  Our world is constantly changing everyday and more and more of Orwell’s predictions are coming true. These changes make his writings even more important today because we are moving towards the Oceania depicted in the novel.  So you see, Orwell was not writing the novel through a Marxist or Socialist perspective, what he was really trying to do is warn us.  Orwell gave us fair warning.

Works Cited

Dobie, Ann B. Theory into Practice: An Introduction to Literary Criticism. Thomson, 2002.

Lucas, Scott “The socialist fallacy.” New Statesman 129.4488 (2000): 47. Academic Search Elite. EBSCO. Web. 18 Nov. 2009.

Orwell, George. 1984. New York: Penguin Books, 2001.

Orwell, George. Why I Write. New York: Penguin Books, 2005.

RODDEN, JOHN “Orwell’s Significance for Intellectuals Today: “A Presence in Our Lives..” Midwest Quarterly 50.3 (2009): 216-231. Academic Search Elite. EBSCO. Web. 19 Nov. 2009.

Wood, James “A FINE RAGE.” New Yorker 85.9 (2009): 54-63. Academic Search Elite. EBSCO. Web. 18 Nov. 2009.

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Theory Essay Workshop Version

Jeff Thorkelson

English 3150

Dr. Devries

19 November 2009

Theory Essay

Since the times when man evolved into critically thinking humans and were able to have reasoning skills, we have always had a social and economical class system.  When the Industrial Revolution came about, man has since been struggling with an ever-changing social system.  Capitalism was at the forefront and the strongest and best were at the top.  The poor, were subjected to a life of poverty and had no chance of moving up on the socioeconomical ladder set up by the industrial revolution.  Marxism however came about and decided to question these ideas put in place and to make people rethink the social structure.  In Marxist ideology “what we often classify as a world view is actually the articulations of the dominant class. Marxism generally focuses on the clash between the dominant and repressed classes in any given age and also may encourage art to imitate what is often termed an “objective” reality” (Siegel).  So by that, they indented to look deeper into the economic system and focus on the troubles between the ones at the top and the ones who are being oppressed by the ones at the top.  With this new Marxist movement, critics began looking and writing at different literary works to discuss the relationship between the arts, politics, and basic economic reality in terms of a general social theory. (Critical Approaches: Definition Of Marxist Criticism). One such novel that many have looked at through the Marxist lens is George Orwell’s novel 1984.  Today, many “diverse views exist today as to the applicability and relevance of his work to current events. Certainly, the three great enemies that he combated Imperialism, socialism, and Marxism”(Rodden 217). We will be exploring Orwell’s novel and provide evidence for both sides of the debate.  Some literary critics believe that Orwell intentionally had Marxism in mind when writing the novel and some think he had a different reason for writing it.  We will investigate deeper into the novel to see if Orwell was intentionally writing the book in a Marxist perspective or was he trying point out a major class difference during the time that he wrote the novel.  If Orwell really was writing the novel from a Marxist perspective, what types did he address in the novel?

Since Marxism really focuses on struggles between the classes in society, we will first look at the way Orwell portrays the classes in his futuristic society in his novel.  One way to look at this novel is by discussing if it is related with dialectical materialism. Dialectical materialism is the theory that “history develops neither in a random fashion nor in a linear one but instead as struggle between contradictions that ultimately find resolution in a synthesis of the two sides. For example, class conflicts lead to new social systems” (Dobie 92).  Some theorists say that Orwell did not like the government that he was living under and thought that he had a strong dislike for its totalitarian ways.  An article from the New Yorker discusses this distaste stating that “After the war, Orwell became most famous as a left-baiting anti-totalitarian…systemic change was necessary in order to make Britain a decent and fair country to live in” (Wood 54).  Some clues of this can be taken out of the novel.  There are three types of social parties presented in 1984.  The Proles, or the lower class and normal everyday citizens, the outer party, who make up a small portion of the government employees, and the inner party, only 2% of the population and is the upper and ruling class.  Our main character, Winston Smith, is part of the outer party who works for the party revising historical records.  With a society that is presented in Orwell’s novel, we get the feeling right from the beginning that the inner party rules over everyone else.  Even the party’s slogan “war is peace, freedom is slavery, ignorance is strength” is oppressive because they are constantly being contradicted and controlled by the ruling party (Orwell 16).  There is also a struggle with the ruling party because everyone is watched at all times.  This is shown by the huge posters stating that “Big Brother is Watching You.”  Screens in everyone’s apartments spew out party propaganda and constantly monitor every move the proles and outer party make.  This can also be supported by a claim that Orwell stated saying that “”The mere efficiency of such a system, the elimination of waste and obstruction, is obvious. However horrible this system may seem to us, it works.” Only by shifting to a planned, nationalized economy and a “classless, ownerless” society could the British prevail” (Wood 54).

Some theorists on the other hand do not think Orwell had any Marxist agenda when writing 1984.  Some theorist think that he was just predicting his vision of the future and did not have any political agenda or statement about how the world was run at that time.  Columnist for the New Yorker, James Wood, wrote on Orwell’s 1984 on this perspective and mentioned that “Orwell feared what he most desired: the future. But it is too easy to gloat over his contradictions to point out that he wrote so well about the drabness and the horror of totalitarianism because he himself had a tendency toward drab omnipotence; or that the great proponent of socialist collectivity liked rustic isolation” (Wood 54).  Orwell wrote what he wrote because of his fear of the future.  Orwell was essentially obsessed with his own weakness of not being able to live forever so he feared the future because of it.  Wood believes that all of his writings on dystopia and totalitarian government are just his way of dealing with the future and what will come of the future.   This could also be seen within the novel because the government that Winston Smith is a part of in the novel essentially stays the same at the end of the plot.  Nothing changes to the structure of the government and things go on as they did at the beginning of the book.  Even from the last few sentences of the novel, we get this.  Winston had just gotten finished at the ministry of love and the novel states that “it was all right, everything was all right, the struggle was finished. He had won the victory over himself.  He loved Big Brother” (Orwell  297).  Winston comes to realize that the government he lived in was fine and that everything would be ok because of this realization.  The whole time throughout the novel, Winston was rebelling against the party and he ended up getting caught and tortured because of it.  Winston then learned that it was ok to follow what the party says and he did finally at the end.  So in a way, this can be seen in a way to some that it is an anti-rebellious novel.  The novel is somehow against Marxism and Socialism and is telling the reader to oblige by the parties rules.

Works Cited

Dobie, Ann B. Theory into Practice: An Introduction to Literary Criticism. Thomson, 2002.

Lucas, Scott “The socialist fallacy.” New Statesman 129.4488 (2000): 47. Academic Search Elite. EBSCO. Web. 18 Nov. 2009.

Orwell, George. 1984. New York: Penguin Books, 2001.

RODDEN, JOHN “Orwell’s Significance for Intellectuals Today: “A Presence in Our Lives..” Midwest Quarterly 50.3 (2009): 216-231. Academic Search Elite. EBSCO. Web. 19 Nov. 2009.

Wood, James “A FINE RAGE.” New Yorker 85.9 (2009): 54-63. Academic Search Elite. EBSCO. Web. 18 Nov. 2009.

 

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Remix Essay

Reason For Choosing This Remix:The reason why i chose to include a slide show for my remix is because my essay was on a movie.  When you watch a movie, the visuals are usually what draws the viewer in and gets the point across. Plain text does not describe the themes in detail as well as both text and images do.  If the reader has some images to go along with what they are reading, they might have a better understanding of the movie and the themes that I have presented.

Essay:

Jeff Thorkelson

English 3150

Professor De Vries

12 November  2009

Media Essay

When one thinks of the word, literature, their mind usually sticks to the idea of a novel or another type of writing. Literature comes to most people as books, essays or any other form of writing that has been typed or written down. With all the new technology that has come into our lives during the Twentieth and Twenty first century, the word literature has really taken on a completely different identity that it has in the past. Literature has really evolved into any type of medium that conveys a message or gets a meaning across. This could be through the use of music lyrics, television, movies and even blogs and other Internet resources. One important media device is movies. When a director or a screen writer has a certain purpose or message that they want to get across, one of the greatest ways to get this message across is through movies because you are not only incorporating images, but you are also incorporating dialogue and language. Movies are a very effective way to tell stories and get a message across because of this. Movies use all the same elements that conventional literature uses such as theme, protagonist vs antagonist, allegories, metaphors, but movies just have moving images to go along with the story being told. One movie in particular that uses a lot of literature elements and still gets across a strong message is the movie Equilibrium. With a great story line, various uses of imagery, great dialogue, multiple running themes and symbolism, the movie gets across a few messages which is why it is considered a literary work.

Equilibrium is deep in meaning on many levels. On the surface, the plot is a fairly simple concept in which a futuristic type police office breaks the societies rule of not feeling any type of emotion. The plot then surrounds the police officers journey with feeling emotion in a society that has completely outlawed it. Many have compared the movie with the Ray Bradbury’s great novel, Fahrenheit 451. In many ways, it is a movie version of the novel. There are many similarities between the two, especially in the protagonist. The main character in the movie is a man named Cleric. His job is very prestigious because he is the ultimate police officer in the society who is very skilled at fire arms, fighting and determining whether a person is a sense offender (what the movie considers people who are illegally feeling emotion). This character can be compared to Guy Montag, the protagonist from Fahrenheit. Montag also has a high profile job within the futuristic government and decides to break the rules. On the surface, Equilibriumcan be classified as just another action movie because that is essentially what it is. From the very first scene in the movie, this is confirmed. From the very beginning of the movie, Cleric busts into a warehouse that is housing priceless pieces of art and kills everyone inside with guns blazing thousands of rounds every which way and eventually burns all the paintings inside of the building. Most of the movie is this action packed. Even when Cleric starts to feel emotion, he still kills everyone in his path, even if he has to kill other police officers that get in his way. All the way up to the last scene in the movie, Cleric is constantly doing what he was trained to do and that is kill. Eventually at the end of the movie, he breaks into the main headquarters of the society and kills everyone, even the main leader of the society. If you do not look at this movie closely, or if you are just watching the movie for pure enjoyment, then some of the meanings behind this movie might be lost. There are many subtleties and references to other literary works, that if you do not pay attention to them, it might come of as powerful as it should be. If we look closer at the movie, we can find that it has so much more meaning than just another action movie. There are many themes, deep character development and internal struggle within the movie that needs to be explored.

The movie Equilibrium has many themes within the movie that are similar to ones that you read in a novel. One of the themes covered in the movie is free will and freethinking. Since the movie is supposed to take place after another World War, the society Libria decides that emotion was the cause of all the worlds wars and violence. Libria bans anything that deals with human emotion. For example, things like music, books, and paintings are all outlawed and punishable by death. The citizens have to inject themselves with a special antidote that suppresses their emotions so they cannot fell anything anymore. Even though there is no more war because of this antidote, many people within the society stil rebel and keep many emotional items hidden within their households. This is why the main character Cleric has an important job to the society. His responsibility is to get rid of all of the societies offenders so they can live in a world of peace. Free will and freethinking plays an important role in the film because it sets up and drives the entire plot. Cleric, at first, thinks that feeling emotion is a horrible thing, but then comes to realize that people need to feel in order to really live. Free thinking is what everyone needs to really truly be human and he realizes this throughout the movie due to a few encounters with sense offenders. When watching the movie, the director does a good job showing that humans need to feel and that it is an essential part of human life. One scene in the movie that really stands out is after the first night that Cleric does not take his antidote to suppress his emotions. The scene starts with Cleric waking up from a restless night of sleep. The windows in his room are covered with a layer of paper, which is placed on all of the societies windows in order to keep the sun and other elements of weather out. Cleric can see a little bit of the suns rays coming through the paper and he can also hear the rain outside that is pounding against the windows. He then proceeds to rip the paper off and he sees a beautiful sunrise with the rain falling down with it. Since Cleric had never really noticed or cared what this had looked like before in his life, he was truly overcome with happiness. The event even made him start to cry for the first time in his life. This is a true turning point in the movie and it shows that Claric is a free thinking now.

Another theme that is portrayed well in this film is government control. Since everything that causes people to have emotions is taken away, the society is censored from everything and the government is the cause of this. The government controls every aspect of the society and if someone does not follow the rules that the society has established, they are arrested and executed. One way that the director shows that the government is in complete control in the film is that everyone is wearing the same thing. Everyone’s clothes are almost exactly the same. Thee is nothing to distinguish one individual from the next. Another would be by the police captures that happen throughout the film. Some of them are subtle and happen in the background, and some are whole scenes. One in particular was when the leader of the society was giving a speech and you can see in the background, two policemen take away a citizen and drag him off screen. You do not know what this person did, but all you can see is that they were sitting in their seat listening to the man speak and then the next minute, he is being dragged off.

When you look deeper into the film, you also get a strong sense of internal struggle. This happens to Claric throughout the movie up until the last scene. When he decides to stop taking the antidote, he struggles throughout the film. Some of these struggles are very subtle and some are obvious. One that is subtle is his first night off of the antidote. When he decides to not take it, he is in his bathroom staring at the mirror. The shot that the director decides to use is a close up profile shot of him just staring at himself in the mirror. You can tell by the expression on his face that he is scared and will probably regret the decision that he is making. The character is really looking into his soul because what he decided to do was extremely dangerous and could ultimately end his life. Cleric also struggles later on in the movie when he starts to think that what he is doing is not worth it and almost takes the antidote again. He begins to get scared for his life and runs back into his bathroom and almost injects himself with the antidote. The mirror though stops him from doing so. He takes a good long look into it and realizes that in the long run, what he is doing will be all worth it in the end. He struggles in that certain moment and finds it in himself to restrain from giving up on all the hard work that he had been doing since he stopped taking the antidote. When watching the movie, Claric does not really have that many lines for the main character of the movie. He says very little throughout the entirety of the movie, but you still get this struggle just by the actions and the way the director decides to shoot certain scenes. The mirror scenes are one in particular that are strong, but another is when he sees someone who reminded him of his wife get executed because she was a sense offender. It took all that was in him to not break down and show his emotion. Since he was in the presence of other officers, he could not give himself away. Through multiple close ups and flashback shots, the director did a good job showing that he was struggling to keep in his emotions while he was witnessing the execution.

When you take a look at film, there can be a lot more meaning behind it rather than just a little entertainment value. Film has become an essential part of literature now and is being used more and more when people are trying to get a certain message across. Film is a great way to do this because it allows the viewer to physically view what the writer had in mind when they were writing the script. When people read a novel for instance, the reader might take the meaning a different way, but with film, the viewer gets the view from the director. When you look closely at a film, there is so many things within them that films are becoming accepted as an essential part of literature.

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Theory Essay Proposal

Many books throughout history have made people think.  Many last for a few years, while some last an entire generation.  There are some books however that make the world think for a lot longer.  Government is always a centerpiece in most cultures and it is one of the most talked about subjects, while also being the most controversial.    Many novels written during the Twentieth Century have changed the way we view our government and have had a lasting impression on the way we conduct our business and our everyday lives.  These novels took some of the governments existing ideas, and also some made up ones (which are becoming truer and truer everyday) and wrote novels in a way to make us look deeper at what the government is doing.    We will look at some of these types of novels through a Marxist Theory viewpoint and discuss the effects that they have had on the American view of government.  Did books like 1984 and Fahrenheit 451 really change the way we look at America back then?  Is this change still having the same effect today?  We will explore how even though some of these novels were written fifty or more years ago, they still have an impact on modern society.  We will also look at how the ideas presented in each represented novel is coming into play in our government today and in the future.

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